tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post5217953040662116691..comments2024-02-20T01:58:18.485-08:00Comments on Cracked Flash Fiction Competition: Cracked Flash: Year 1, Week 11Mariah Burketthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11218074283132166810noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post-53991240648926746502015-09-08T18:56:11.925-07:002015-09-08T18:56:11.925-07:00Thanks. This was one of those times, I really wan...Thanks. This was one of those times, I really wanted just a few more words. I think the last episode could have come out a lot smoother. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post-87402864553010306612015-09-06T07:10:34.988-07:002015-09-06T07:10:34.988-07:00Punny. I'm glad you posted.Punny. I'm glad you posted. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post-59119675799081065732015-09-06T07:06:46.117-07:002015-09-06T07:06:46.117-07:00Such fun, but boy is the house going to get humid ...Such fun, but boy is the house going to get humid as everything dries out. Well done, fun to read. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post-338085974422761202015-09-06T07:04:33.964-07:002015-09-06T07:04:33.964-07:00The panic of almost missing the flight. Perfect.The panic of almost missing the flight. Perfect.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post-2136741953349466562015-09-06T07:02:21.072-07:002015-09-06T07:02:21.072-07:00Humorous imagry, bolting down hall ways, nailing d...Humorous imagry, bolting down hall ways, nailing down rugs.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post-11099405984414494052015-09-06T06:58:59.184-07:002015-09-06T06:58:59.184-07:00Going off your meds playing into this one again. P...Going off your meds playing into this one again. Perhaps the meds were given to hide his intents in the first place. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post-29043873097761485082015-09-06T06:56:26.927-07:002015-09-06T06:56:26.927-07:00Yep, sometimes its best to run away. Yep, sometimes its best to run away. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post-81524937712127557362015-09-06T06:54:05.797-07:002015-09-06T06:54:05.797-07:00Well done. I like the way their is a timeline giv...Well done. I like the way their is a timeline given only by the captors aging. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post-36134834621580850572015-09-06T06:17:54.642-07:002015-09-06T06:17:54.642-07:00Love how you used bolts and nuts and tacks and scr...Love how you used bolts and nuts and tacks and screws so seamlessly. Loved it. The rush job worked!firdaushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15927140360014108805noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post-36708180053051777102015-09-06T06:15:44.356-07:002015-09-06T06:15:44.356-07:00I guess recurring dreams do indicate that God is a...I guess recurring dreams do indicate that God is at work. Nice one!firdaushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15927140360014108805noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post-40239744738116906882015-09-06T06:12:46.409-07:002015-09-06T06:12:46.409-07:00This is so sweet. 😊This is so sweet. 😊firdaushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15927140360014108805noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post-1803737030241172802015-09-06T06:11:55.657-07:002015-09-06T06:11:55.657-07:00Ohh! I just love this. I can feel the rush. Ohh! I just love this. I can feel the rush. firdaushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15927140360014108805noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post-34610636133836998572015-09-06T06:09:02.601-07:002015-09-06T06:09:02.601-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.firdaushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15927140360014108805noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post-57986497865640058672015-09-06T06:08:01.066-07:002015-09-06T06:08:01.066-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.firdaushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15927140360014108805noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post-69398685177099876232015-09-06T06:06:46.827-07:002015-09-06T06:06:46.827-07:00Wow! Such a unique take on the prompt. Well done!Wow! Such a unique take on the prompt. Well done!firdaushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15927140360014108805noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post-38687498983782547282015-09-06T06:05:32.411-07:002015-09-06T06:05:32.411-07:00'Intergalactic' dating! I'd be scared ...'Intergalactic' dating! I'd be scared stiff. Made me laugh. Good job. firdaushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15927140360014108805noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post-48787128290225798912015-09-06T06:03:18.845-07:002015-09-06T06:03:18.845-07:00Loved the twist in the end. Loved the twist in the end. firdaushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15927140360014108805noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post-91918593078120057992015-09-05T23:54:02.219-07:002015-09-05T23:54:02.219-07:00Square Set
She took one look at the oncoming puns...Square Set<br /><br />She took one look at the oncoming punster and bolted down the hallway. Her feet hammering against the hardwood floors, she realized she was screwed. <br /><br />She knew the perpetrator would be nailed if the police were able to drive him to a confession but she also knew that he was nuts and wanted nothing more than to put a hex on him.<br /><br />She ran as fast as she could, but when she turned to check his progress, she could see his chiseled features set square on her.<br /><br />She wrenched her eyes away from him, realizing she needed a change in tacks, but couldn’t quite put her thumb on it. Then she saw the problem: he was locked tight with her and couldn’t break away.<br /><br />He was as much her prisoner as she was his - they were fitted for each other.<br /><br />Tired, she stopped running and learned, to her relief, that awls well that ends well.<br /><br /><br />155 Words<br />@mishmhem<br />#FlashDogs<br /><br />(I tried to write another after reading Colin's entry but I didn't have the time)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post-11676321004700064412015-09-05T23:04:08.947-07:002015-09-05T23:04:08.947-07:00And now I must go back to the drawing board... And now I must go back to the drawing board... Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post-30562871500103730372015-09-05T19:52:30.014-07:002015-09-05T19:52:30.014-07:00Course Correction
Smitty bolted down the main cor...<b>Course Correction</b><br /><br />Smitty bolted down the main corridor of his transport vessel. He was assigned to this tub after washing out of fighter training. He was rushing to the bridge to deal with a collision alarm. He was mad at himself for being so far away, and even angrier for washing out of fighter training. He just kept making the same mistakes.<br /><br />As he ran, the other end of the hall splintered. He was sucked out into the vacuum of space. <br /><br />-----<br /><br />Smitty jolted awake at the sound of the proximity alarm. He had fallen asleep in the prayer room he had fashioned in the back of the ship. Remembering the dream he stopped at a console and remotely ordered the ship to stop. Turning to run down the main corridor he recalled it was his faith that had caused the other cadets to vote him out of the squadron.<br /><br />Running down the hallway he was dismayed to see the hallway crumpling toward him, crushing him in the debris before he could react. <br /><br />-----<br /><br />Smitty startled awake again, realizing he’d had this dream twice. He used the remote console to order evasive maneuvers, hard astern. <br /><br />In that moment of waiting he thought about his prayer room. If he couldn’t be a fighter pilot, could he at least have a deeper spirituality? He built his prayer room to seek God, praying for God’s guidance. <br /><br />These thoughts were interrupted by the hull suddenly getting hot, then melting into the corona of a star. <br /><br />-----<br /><br />Smitty woke again to the alarm, but this time for real. He remote ordered the evasive turn except hard to port. He ran to the bridge. After he was safe, he considered why and how he had those three dreams. He had to consider whether his prayers had been answered. <br /><br />297 words<br />www.twitter.com/CharlesWShort <br />www.charleswshort.com<br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post-47902585308720248982015-09-05T19:03:47.321-07:002015-09-05T19:03:47.321-07:00In the Hallway
@agardana09
143 (sickly sweet) word...In the Hallway<br />@agardana09<br />143 (sickly sweet) words<br /><br />She bolted down the hallway, the children screaming behind her. Behind them was a man, a man with a water hose. <br />He held the nozzle down and the screams turned to shrill laughter. She barely got away, dashing through the bathroom door. She poked her head around the corner and observed her children under the kitchen fountain’s stream. In the moment, it did not matter that they had carpet or that they would need to dirty a clean towel.<br />Her son spun under the spray, head facing the ceiling as the cool water broke through the summer heat. Her youngest sat next to him, having fallen in her escape. Her hands rose upward and feet kicked in delight. <br />And over their shoulders, behind the nozzle, she met the eyes of the partner she loved and realized that in this moment lived her happiness.<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post-14500290518036052892015-09-05T17:45:06.538-07:002015-09-05T17:45:06.538-07:00Awesome twist of the prompt!Awesome twist of the prompt!Iores Troolyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15015510392917287622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post-36885161477888551412015-09-05T17:42:20.160-07:002015-09-05T17:42:20.160-07:00Close call
299 words (hope my Open Office doesn&#...Close call<br /><br />299 words (hope my Open Office doesn't lie)<br />Iores Trooly<br />@io_trooly<br /><br /># # #<br /><br />She bolted down the hallway, wheezing for air, hair sticking to skin. People flew by in a blur, the faceless crowd parting for her and merging again when she had passed. It was easy to ignore the looks, some confused, some sympathetic, some annoyed. The corridor was functional infinity, lit by hard light. Signs in bright colours were her guide.<br /><br />But the voice... this impersonal, metallic voice that came from everywhere and called her name, sounding bored and urgent at once - she couldn't ignore this voice. She knew there were speakers in the walls, but in her mind, it came from somewhere beyond the point where the walls converged, the only sound that was able to drown out the blood pounding in her ears.<br /><br />She waited for this voice. As long as it called her, she could still make it. An arrow flashed above her head, and the bag with her laptop crashed painfully into her kidney as she darted around the corner. She took the escalator steps two at a time, arms working on the railing to pull her upwards.<br /><br />A sigh of relief escaped her when she stumbled around the last bend. A long line of counters, a monitor flashing in angry red, the man behind the gate glaring, menace in his face.<br /><br />The last hurdle. The paper she slammed onto the polished surface was crumpled and damp.<br /><br />"Sandson," she gasped.<br /><br />For an endless moment, he stared at her, taking in the flush and the panic and the plea. When he finally took the ticket, pushed it through the scanner and the gate-light turned green, she wanted to cry.<br /><br />In the hall beyond, a boy clenched his father's hand, bouncing and yelling.<br /><br />"Boarding for Orlando is at gate E27. Enjoy your stay in Disneyland, Mrs. Sandson."<br />Iores Troolyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15015510392917287622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post-49584498952494969272015-09-05T17:39:24.812-07:002015-09-05T17:39:24.812-07:00"The Turn of the Wrench"
(198 Words)
Sh..."The Turn of the Wrench"<br />(198 Words)<br /><br />She bolted down the hallway, though I wasn’t sure why. I watched her with the wrench, tightening the nuts at each end of the passage.<br /><br />“Come on, Sadie, don’t you think this has gone far enough?”<br /><br />It began with a DIY show on television, which led to Sadie purchasing tools and deciding to take on some jobs around the house. Wonderful! I’m not particularly adept at such things, and she seemed to have an aptitude. The kitchen cupboards no longer stuck, she made a new rail for the deck, and even fixed my old footstool that I retired to the garage when it lost a leg.<br /><br />But now she had run out of projects and was doing silly things to feed her addiction.<br /><br />She nailed down the rugs, added four more legs to the kitchen table, and installed cat flaps into all the doors.<br /><br />Finally I could take it no longer.<br /><br />“Why the bolts in the hallway? Are you nuts?”<br /><br />She looked up at me clutching the wrench, with such menace in her eyes as I have never seen before.<br /><br />“Screw you!” she screamed.<br /><br />Then her whole countenance changed. She smiled and glanced at her toolbox.<br /><br />I ran.<br /><br />Colin Smith<br />@colin_d_smithColin Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03292997431935215499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4035897181563606511.post-17799599613257645682015-09-05T14:58:42.326-07:002015-09-05T14:58:42.326-07:00@firdausp
Paranoid
(299 words)
She bolted! Like a...@firdausp<br />Paranoid<br />(299 words)<br /><br />She bolted! Like a scared hare she ran down the hallway, through the front door, across the garden, out of the gate and into the nearby forest. The sound of hurried footsteps behind her made her run faster. He was calling after her, but she just ran and ran until her lungs burned with lack of oxygen, and her side hurt with a stitch, so she couldn't go any further. Collapsing under a tree, she tried to catch her breath. <br />She had seen it in his eyes again, just like before. <br />He had been hammering a nail in the wall for his new painting, and as she had passed him in the hallway he had turned. His hand still held the hammer high and in his eyes she'd seen the restrained urge to hit her with it. Scared as hell, she had bolted.<br />Now as she lay panting she could hear approaching footsteps. She sat upright, looking frantically around for something—anything! <br />Her eyes fell on a broken branch, she grabbed it and took a stance of a baseball player ready to strike. <br />He emerged from the trees and stopped when he saw her. He looked at the branch then at her, confused. <br />"What just happened?" <br />"You want to kill me. I know!" She choked out. <br />"Why would I do that? I love you!"<br />"I saw how you looked at me, you were..." She hesitated, not sure anymore. <br />"Have you stopped taking your medicines, honey?" He looked concerned. <br />Dropping the branch, she sank to her knees, crying. She was being paranoid again, discontinuing her medicines hadn't been a good idea. <br />"I'm sorry..." she had bagun to say when she looked up and saw him reach behind his back and bring out the hammer, a blur before it hit her. <br /> <br />firdaushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15927140360014108805noreply@blogger.com